THE POSER 

I've been working on this novel for about 15 months. Originally called Seduction At Daybreak, I changed it for reasons I'm sure you will come to understand. Having never written a Murder Mystery, I was swimming in waters in which I was less than familiar; however, I came out feeling confident I not only accomplished a feat, but am prepared for the next one. (Yes, I'm already planning a sequel).

You are among a small handful of "Beta Testers" I've asked to read this "next-to-final draft" before publication. I THANK YOU so very much for volunteering to provide me feedback. As you'll see, there are 3 "flavors" available: .epub, .mobi (kindle) and .pdf. 

At the end, I ask to you answer 10 short questions at the bottom of the page. Please do not feel as though your answers must be elaborate; in fact, I prefer shorter. Just go with any "visceral hits" you have. 

This will go a long way in helping me "fine tune" any changes that may be necessary. Lastly, if you feel like sharing deeper insights, I'll always welcome them. Read: No Pressure!

please read & return NO LATER THAN 5/31/18. Thank you!


 
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10 QUESTION survey

1:  Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?

2:  Did you get oriented fairly quickly as to whose story it is, and where it takes place? If not, why not?

3:  Did the setting interest you and were the descriptions vivid and real? Elaborate as you wish.

4:  Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about what was going to happen next

5:  Were there ANY parts that confused or annoyed you? IF SO, which part and why? 

6:  Were the characters believable, and/or did you have a favorite?  If so, which one and why?

7:  Did the dialogue sound natural to you? If not, whose dialogue perhaps sounded "contrived"?

8:  2-Parter: Did you feel there was too much or too little dialogue? What about too much/too little description? 

9:  Was there enough tension & intrigue to keep your interest? Yes or No.

10:  Was the ending satisfying, believable, and did you like or dislike it? Embellish as you wish.

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BONUS ROUND :: IF I COULD CHOOSE ONLY ONE, I WOULD WANT A LOT MORE OF THIS:
THIS STORY WAS FULL OF MYSTERY & INTRIGUE AND LEFT ME WANTING MORE!
THIS STORY WAS FULL OF MYSTERY & INTRIGUE AND LEFT ME WANTING MORE!

THANK YOU!